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Human
Free
8 parts 13617 words
State: Drafting

The Gaian Devolution is saving the planet. By exterminating the people.

Onder Swart is the last Khoisan in South Africa. He wants to return to his homeland and live a natural life. But the Gaians have declared it a human-free animal preserve. Their robots patrol its borders with deadly force.

He and friend-from-space Astrix work up a scheme to seize control of the Gaian System. But the Gaians are using Onder’s epidemic-resistant DNA to complete their master plan and wipe out all humans.

Chapter 1

George Donnelly
More than 1 year ago
Chapters 7 and 8 are up now. Sorry, got ahead of myself. I've actually finished the first 15 chapters but it will take me a little while to edit them up and post them. Astrix's bodily integrity has been violated and she's being held in a cage of sorts. Onder is flying towards the Gaian city, robots waiting to ambush him. Enjoy! George

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George Donnelly updated Human Free with 2 new parts and said "Chapters 7 and 8 are up now. Sorry, got ahead of myself. I've actually finished the first 15 chapters but it will take me a little while to edit them up and post them. Astrix's bodily integrity has been violated and she's being held in a cage of s...".

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George Donnelly updated Human Free with 2 new parts and said "Chapters 5 and 6 are here. Onder is blinded and Chairperson Flora B. Harper is having a very frustrating day, indeed!".

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George Donnelly updated Human Free with 2 new parts and said "Chapters 3 and 4 are here. Meet Astrix, a hard-headed girl from space and Onder fights sharks!".

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George Donnelly updated Human Free with 1 new part (Chapter 2) and said "Chapter 2 is here! Meet Flora B. Harper, Chairperson of the Gaian System.".

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