Human FreeBy George Donnelly
The Gaian Devolution is saving the planet. By exterminating the people.
Onder Swart is the last Khoisan in South Africa. He wants to return to his homeland and live a natural life. But the Gaians have declared it a human-free animal preserve. Their robots patrol its borders with deadly force.
He and friend-from-space Astrix work up a scheme to seize control of the Gaian System. But the Gaians are using Onder’s epidemic-resistant DNA to complete their master plan and wipe out all humans.
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