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CONRAD BOCK aspires to be the first of his family to graduate college. Two semesters away from a degree from TCU: his scholarships spent, his savings depleted, his part-time wages insufficient and his rent due, he resorts to selling his plasma. During a plasmaphoresis session he meets a lady who describes a lucrative opportunity as a volunteer for experiments her husband is conducting at the university. All he has to do is die.

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I would appreciate feedback on characters, dialogue, the hook, style, setting, plot, conflict, and/or grammar. Thanks.

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Rob Witherspoon 1 part with said "I would appreciate feedback on characters, dialogue, the hook, style, setting, plot, conflict, and/or grammar. Thanks." and posted Ascensions.

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